West Coast University Wk 5 Racism as A Public Health Issue Discussion
Feedback to Learner5/3/21 4:25 AM
We have to fix your research question and we’re going to do some class today. Medical condition outcomes can either be good or bad period so you have to say poor health outcomes. You gotta fix your first sentence in article 1 summary. So everything that you have here is just saying what is in the article it doesn’t tell me what the summary was and what the actual findings were. And the in text citation has to come at the end. fixer upper sentence for Article 2 as well. I don’t know why you’re using Article 3 if it’s poorly reviewed. Did you mean peer? You don’t really have a literature review section in this paper you have specific sections and I want to know where you’re going to put each of these articles. The in text citations always need to go at the end of the summary.
